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-JeamdV 
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Geschrieben am: 02.06.2011 um 16:58 Uhr
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Hey :)
Ich halte morgen mein Referat in Englisch über Das Buch "Gregs Tagebuch"
Wäre nett, wenn ihr es euch mal durchlesen würdet und eure Kritik dalassen würdet 
Today I would like to present the Book “diary of a wimpy kid part one”
It´s kind of comic-diary, but greg, the maincharacter thinks, that it´s just a journal, that he later wants to give reporters, if he is someday famous. Actually , he never get famous
The first part of a Bookserie of 5 books
Bestsellers in New York
The book was filmed last year and this year the second part.
it has 224 pages like any book in the series and just one chapter.
it was Written by Jeff Kinney
and the publisher is Amulet Books In New York
The Characters are:
Greg: He´s the main character, newly arrived in the middle school, along with "gorillas".
He is too thin, lazy, video game addicted, and he likes to make like his little brother Manny cry.
Rowley: He is Greg's best friend, but he´s a little bit mentally retarded. They often wonder how they Could get best friends now.
Rodrick: He´s just Greg's brother. He has his own heavy metal band called (löded diper), that is Heavy metal slang and means in german eine volle windel.
He loves to play a prank on Greg
Manny: He is the youngest of the family and is loved by all, no matter what he does
But Greg don´t like him. He is jealous of Manny.
At least there are Mom & Dad.They like to punish greg very much. Greg think that his mom is very embarassing
Now I would like to tell you the Plot:
A new school year has begun. The 13-year-old Greg Heffley is now the Junior High School, and is just about the silliest idea ever. There are kids fresh out of elemtary school, thrown together with giant gorillas who have to shave twice a day. But then Greg joined the Safety Patrol Organisation. Such a life as a teenager is full of little dangers and entertaining misunderstandings. So Greg just begins to write in his “Journal” what he feels all. Above all there was his silly classmate Rowley , which can sometimes be quite embarrassing. But when Rowleys popularity at school suddenly rises, Greg has a Really big Problem. Because suddenly he steals the Comic-Ideas from Greg to become more popular. Then Greg gets angry and is looking for a new best friend. The end of the Book is, that Greg fails at trying to finda new best friend.
But when they wanted to fight, suddently a couple of Bullys want to beat them. The Rowdy told them they should eat an old cheese in the schoolyard. Greg was able to fight his way out , but Rowley had to eat the old cheese. Because the cheese is very notorious in the school yard, Greg don´t want to eat this. Everyboy in the hole School would think he´s disgusting.
But then Greg realized, that he was a bad friend, he told everyone, that he eaten the Cheese, not Rowley. After this Act they are best friends again and they write their Comics together.
Now I would like to read a few Lines:
( Page -)
This was my Presentation about the Book “Diary of a Wimpy Kid”
Thank´s for paying attention and I hope you enjoyed it.
Have you any last Questions?
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Mega-iisiii 
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Geschrieben am: 02.06.2011 um 17:01 Uhr
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Über des buch machst du ne presentation??
http://www.english-in-motion.de/
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-JeamdV
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Zitat von Mega-iisiii: Über des buch machst du ne presentation??
Jo, Referat mit Tageslichtprojektorfolie :)
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Markus_93
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Also ich habs nur grob überflogen und einige sprachliche / inhaltliche Fehler gefunden. Den Zusammenhang kann man trotzdem gut verstehen
Der kürzeste Weg zwischen zwei Menschen ist ein Lächeln.
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Quintian - 37
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Zitat: But Greg don´t like him
Greg mögen ihn nicht. He, she, it...!
Zitat: He loves to play a prank on Greg
Er liebt es, Greg den gleichen Streich immer und immer wieder zu spielen?
Zitat: The Characters are:
Im Deutschen sähe das dann so aus: "Die charaktere sind". Groß- und Kleinschreibung beachten.
Nenne mir bitte eine Sprache auf der Welt, in der Verben großgeschrieben werden.
Zitat: The first part of a Bookserie of 5 books
Siehe den Punkt darüber; noch dazu sagst du auch nicht "eine Buchserie von fünf Büchern", sondern "eine Reihe(bzw. Serie) von fünf Büchern".
Zitat: Greg think that his mom is very embarassing
He, she, it...!
Zitat: “diary of a wimpy kid part one”
Wie war das mit Buchtiteln..?
"Diary of a Wimpy Kid Part One".
Setzen, 4-.
Groß- und Kleinschreibung beachten.
Sanity is for weaklings!
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-JeamdV
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Zitat: “diary of a wimpy kid part one”
Zitat: Wie war das mit Buchtiteln..?
"Diary of a Wimpy Kid Part One".
Setzen, 4-.
Groß- und Kleinschreibung beachten.
Danke, jedoch ist das nicht die schriftliche Ausarbeitung, dass ist lediglich der Sprechtext 
Meine Lehrer lassen ungeniertes ablesen zu, und geben trozdem ne eins, aber die anderen sachen, danke :)
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Quintian - 37
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Ist mr schnurz, ob das dein Ablesetext war oder nicht; da sind so viele Groß- und Kleinschreibefehler drin, dass ich sehen kann, dass du ein Problem damit hast.
Sanity is for weaklings!
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-JeamdV
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Zitat von Quintian: Ist mr schnurz, ob das dein Ablesetext war oder nicht; da sind so viele Groß- und Kleinschreibefehler drin, dass ich sehen kann, dass du ein Problem damit hast.
Naja, wenn ich drauf achten würde, schreib ich´s eigentlich auch richtig, aber mit Käsebrot in der Hand, kann man nur mit einer Hand schreiben, und da es sowieso nicht wichtig ist, warum sollte ich es machen?
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Markus_93
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Zitat:
It´s kind of comic-diary, but greg, the maincharacter thinks, that it´s just a journal, that he later wants to give reporters, if he is someday famous. Actually , he never get famous
Also was der Part aussagen soll hab ich noch nich verstanden. Das Buch (das du präsentieren willst?) ist eine Art Comic-Tagebuch?
-> Überarbeiten
Erst das Buch vorstellen (Titel, Autor, Genre, Erscheinungsjahr,...). Dann kurz den Inhalt anreißen / in einem Satz zusammenfassen.
Der Rest deiner Gliederung passt soweit
Zitat: The book was filmed last year and this year the second part.
The first part of the book was turned into a movie last year which was proceeded this year when the second part was turned into a movie, too.
Man hat ja nicht das Buch gefilmt, sondern den Inhalt.
Zitat: So Greg just begins to write in his “Journal” what he feels all.
Greg begins to write all of his feelings down in his "Journal".
Zitat: Have you any last Questions?
Do you have any questions?
Mal ein paar Beispiele.
Mir ist noch aufgefallen, dass du sehr oft 'but' verwendest. Das lässt das ganze etwas holprig wirken.
Der kürzeste Weg zwischen zwei Menschen ist ein Lächeln.
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-JeamdV
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Geschrieben am: 02.06.2011 um 17:38 Uhr
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OKe, danke, es soll eine Art Comic-Tagebuch sein, ja..
Merkt man das echt mit dem But?
Welche Alternativen?
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Markus_93
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Zitat von -JeamdV: OKe, danke, es soll eine Art Comic-Tagebuch sein, ja..
Dann hat der Inhalt des Buches, also was der Protagonist denkt, in dem Einleitungssatz nichts verloren.
Zitat von -JeamdV: Merkt man das echt mit dem But?
Welche Alternativen?
In vielen Fällen kannst du es auch einfach weglassen^^
Der kürzeste Weg zwischen zwei Menschen ist ein Lächeln.
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-JeamdV
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Today I would like to present the Book “Diary of a Wimpy Kid: A Novel in Cartoons”
It´s the first part of a series of five books
It´s the Bestseller in New York
The first Part of the Book was filmed last year and this year the second part come to the Cinemas
It has 224 pages like every book in the series and just one chapter.
It was Written by Jeff Kinney and the publisher is Amulet Books In New York
It´s a kind of comic-diary, which is mostly a fictional story, but some parts are from the real Childhood from the Author.
The characters are:
Greg: He´s the main character newly arrived in the middle school, alone with older Teenager, who have to shave twice daily.
He is too thin, lazy, video game addicted, and he likes to make like his little brother Manny cry.
He writes the Diary. He says that it´s just a journal, that he later wants to give reporters, if he is someday famous. Actually, he never get famous.
Rowley: He is Greg's best friend and little bit mentally retarded. They often wonder how they could get best friends now.
Rodrick: He´s Greg's older brother. He has his own heavy metal band called (löded diper), that is Heavy metal slang and means in german eine volle windel.
He loves to play pranks on Greg.
Manny: He is the Youngest in the family and is loved by all, no matter what he does
Except Greg . He doesn´t like him, because he is jealous of Manny.
At least there are Mom & Dad. They like to punish Greg very much. Greg thinks that his mom is very embarrassing.
Now I would like to tell you the Plot:
A new school year has begun. The 13-year-old Greg Heffley is now at the Middle School. He´s just come out of Elemtary School, together with teenagers who are taller, stronger and have to shave twice a day. But then Greg joined the Safety Patrol Organisation and he has a new Opinion of School. Such a life as a teenager is full of little dangers and entertaining misunderstandings. Greg begins to write all of his feelings down in his "Journal. Above all there was his silly classmate Rowley, which can sometimes be quite embarrassing. But when Rowleys popularity at school suddenly rises, Greg has a really big Problem.
Because suddenly Rowley steals the Comic-Ideas from Greg to become more popular. Then Greg gets angry and is looking for a new best friend. The end of the Book is, that Greg fails at trying to find a new best friend.
Then they started a fight, but suddenly a couple of older Boys want to beat them. The Rowdies told them they should eat an old cheese in the schoolyard. Greg was able to fight his way out by saying he had an allergic Reaction to Cheese, but Rowley had to eat the old cheese. Because the cheese is very notorious in the school yard, Greg don´t want to eat this. Everybody in the whole School would think he´s disgusting.
But then Greg realized, that he was a bad friend and he told everyone, that he ate the Cheese, not Rowley. After this Act they are best friends again and they write their Comics together.
Now I would like to read a few Lines:
( Page -)
This was my Presentation about the Book “Diary of a Wimpy Kid”
Thank´s for paying attention and I hope you enjoyed it.
Do you have any questions?
Andere Rennen Raus - Wir gehen Rein. " Im Feuer"
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-JeamdV
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Geschrieben am: 02.06.2011 um 18:21 Uhr
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egal ,ich geh dann mal
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-JeamdV
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Geschrieben am: 02.06.2011 um 18:22 Uhr
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