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MapleWalnuts

- 35
Fortgeschrittener (offline)

Dabei seit 09.2005
36 Beiträge

Geschrieben am: 05.07.2006 um 01:32 Uhr

I have nothing to say,
but befor I will go,
I will give you something
about a time in my life.

I wrote it one morning
when I was thinking of you,
on the time in the nights
when I was staying with you.

I will never forget
when your arm touched mins,
and we where watching the stars
in a night of July.

But now when I leave,
please always remember,
how the feeling could be
if we stay together!

don't cry, say fuck you and smile! =)

Chagrin

- 38
Fortgeschrittener (offline)

Dabei seit 12.2004
48 Beiträge

Geschrieben am: 05.07.2006 um 03:11 Uhr

Zitat von MapleWalnuts:

I have nothing to say,
but befor I will go,
I will give you something
about a time in my life.

I wrote it one morning
when I was thinking of you,
on the time in the nights
when I was staying with you.

I will never forget
when your arm touched mins,
and we where watching the stars
in a night of July.

But now when I leave,
please always remember,
how the feeling could be
if we stay together!

Das erinnert mich an Tom Waits' "Ruby's Arms" ...............................................

Öfters mal bei Rot über die Ampel gehn!

Chagrin

- 38
Fortgeschrittener (offline)

Dabei seit 12.2004
48 Beiträge

Geschrieben am: 05.07.2006 um 03:22 Uhr

Zitat von MapleWalnuts:

I have nothing to say,
but befor I will go,
I will give you something
about a time in my life.

I wrote it one morning
when I was thinking of you,
on the time in the nights
when I was staying with you.

I will never forget
when your arm touched mins,
and we where watching the stars
in a night of July.

But now when I leave,
please always remember,
how the feeling could be
if we stay together!

schreibt doch mal so, dass man nicht ab der ersten Zeile an weiß wie das Gedicht enden wird... Mensch.... Lauter stinknormale Typen hier.... :weiner:

:weiner:

Öfters mal bei Rot über die Ampel gehn!

MapleWalnuts

- 35
Fortgeschrittener (offline)

Dabei seit 09.2005
36 Beiträge

Geschrieben am: 05.07.2006 um 07:04 Uhr

Zitat von Chagrin:

Zitat von MapleWalnuts:

I have nothing to say,
but befor I will go,
I will give you something
about a time in my life.

I wrote it one morning
when I was thinking of you,
on the time in the nights
when I was staying with you.

I will never forget
when your arm touched mins,
and we where watching the stars
in a night of July.

But now when I leave,
please always remember,
how the feeling could be
if we stay together!

Das erinnert mich an Tom Waits' "Ruby's Arms" ...............................................

Hhmm das kenn ich nicht, und tut mir leid, sind eben nicht alles Kuenstler. Vorallem nicht von Anfang an!

don't cry, say fuck you and smile! =)

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