Geschrieben am: 14.12.2011 um 10:35 Uhr
Zuletzt editiert am: 14.12.2011 um 10:35 Uhr
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Zitat von Sunnyshay: so hört es sich vertont an The Last Cigarette
He caught the fire which burned in his head
and he was ready for his last breath
when thoughts fade to black that he couldn't get
deep in his mind he is already dead
So runnin' away from the silent inside
and 'cause he never rests he couldn't hide
he kept the tears and the pain on his mind
so all those people thought that he is alright
he was so tired an sick of the world
he was just sacrificed so they can be statisfied
there was a shine in his eye it told that he lied
but only a smile is what they recognized
so silent inside he layer on his bed
without a fear for his last breath
wrote his last words yeah that what they get
and then he smoked his last cigarette before he left
Super Text.
Aber da muss mehr Gefühl in die Stimme, der Sound passt, da muss aber noch ein Funke rein,
was ironisches, dem Text wegen.
Am Ende noch ein paar Pausen, kurzen Break und leiser werden.
Tipp von mir, kriegst aber ein Like.
Zu wandern auf dem Pfad der Rechtschaffenen, gleichgestellt der Dinge die wir Gerechtigkeit nennen.
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