Zitat von Scary_Faith:

||||| Today was just one of the Days I feel uncompleted. It was like “what am I doing here?!” “Why do I live?!” I don’t now what and why. What sense life has? In my eyes I see the world in a sight kind of “life just isn’t worth all these pain!”. I don’t see a reason why to go on anymore. It just hurts to see all these things I wanna have or’ just wanna change, but I’m just to weak. Do you know how it hurts to se anything you love, with all your heart, but you know you’ll never get it. Never! It’s just don’t worth the fight anymore. I’m sitting here and think about the Days I’d lough and had fun, but why?! Why, I don’t understand it. I lough but deep inside I’m dying , and every person who’s happy just bring me down.. More and more. There isn’t an end. The only thing what makes me feel a little more complete is music, that describe my situation. It reminds me of my situation, and sometimes it just bring me a little more down.. I don’t know If you understand this. Aww.. it’s hard to erase all these things I think about. It hurts! Do you know what I mean?! Do you know what it feels like?! Do you understand that i just can’t anymore?! That I’m just falling deeper and deeper.! It’s such destroying, but I’m just to weak to give everything an ending. I can’t describe how I’m feeling. I know that there are people, who has nothing in life, but they’re still going on ‘cause they’re strong enough to. But I’m just to little to, I’m just to obscure. Just give me an reason to wake up and face the light!. I don’t believe there is any. So I've been searching for a way out of this life! ||||

Was hält ihr davon? ^^

Zitat von DaveDelishus:

Ziemlich viele Rechtschreib- und Grammatikfehler...

Zitat von DaveDelishus:

Ziemlich viele Rechtschreib- und Grammatikfehler...

Zitat von Acw:

Gedicht geschrieben und eine Stunde später von der Team-Ulm Welt verschwunden. So möchte niemand enden.

Zitat von Scary_Faith:

||||| Today was just one of the Days I feel uncompleted. It was like “what am I doing here?!” “Why do I live?!” I don’t now what and why. What sense life has? In my eyes I see the world in a sight kind of “life just isn’t worth all these pain!”. I don’t see a reason why to go on anymore. It just hurts to see all these things I wanna have or’ just wanna change, but I’m just to weak. Do you know how it hurts to se anything you love, with all your heart, but you know you’ll never get it. Never! It’s just don’t worth the fight anymore. I’m sitting here and think about the Days I’d lough and had fun, but why?! Why, I don’t understand it. I lough but deep inside I’m dying , and every person who’s happy just bring me down.. More and more. There isn’t an end. The only thing what makes me feel a little more complete is music, that describe my situation. It reminds me of my situation, and sometimes it just bring me a little more down.. I don’t know If you understand this. Aww.. it’s hard to erase all these things I think about. It hurts! Do you know what I mean?! Do you know what it feels like?! Do you understand that i just can’t anymore?! That I’m just falling deeper and deeper.! It’s such destroying, but I’m just to weak to give everything an ending. I can’t describe how I’m feeling. I know that there are people, who has nothing in life, but they’re still going on ‘cause they’re strong enough to. But I’m just to little to, I’m just to obscure. Just give me an reason to wake up and face the light!. I don’t believe there is any. So I've been searching for a way out of this life! ||||

Was hält ihr davon? ^^

Zitat von sabbse:

Grausam.. Mädel, entweder holst du ganz schnell ganz viel Englischstoff nach oder du lässt egnlische Gedichte bleiben -.-"

Zitat von deidre:

Ich habe auch eins mal gemacht:

Crystal clear

Eyesw open wide in absence of sleep
the death bringer within continues to reap
harvesting my emotion, and leaving me insane,
the absence of my heat leaving me in pain.
Every riddle has an answer,
this riddle does not, this riddle is my cancer,
like the disease it will multiply
haunting me until the day i die.
The blood on my tongue opens my eyes,
remembering the one who lives forever, never dies.
I soon realize the one killing me is me
I am the reaper, and will forever be....