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Lonely Soul

i_am_serious - 31
Profi (offline)

Dabei seit 06.2009
532 Beiträge
Geschrieben am: 03.11.2009 um 07:50 Uhr

My lonely soul, you're all on your own,
what's it like inside your mind?
Are you still in darkness,
waiting for the sun?

My saddest soul, you're on the ground,
why do you cover your eyes?
Are you still crying
like a weeping angel?

My hoping soul, you don't understand,
who's going to hear you shout?
There's no one left, you're all alone,
so please, answer me this.
Why is there still hope within
when hope never comes without pain?
dada2005 - 31
Halbprofi (offline)

Dabei seit 11.2005
279 Beiträge
Geschrieben am: 03.11.2009 um 11:12 Uhr

Zitat von i_am_serious:

My lonely soul, you're all on your own,
what's it like inside your mind?
Are you still in darkness,
waiting for the sun?

My saddest soul, you're on the ground,
why do you cover your eyes?
Are you still crying
like a weeping angel?

My hoping soul, you don't understand,
who's going to hear you shout?
There's no one left, you're all alone,
so please, answer me this.
Why is there still hope within
when hope never comes without pain?


:daumenhoch: jut jut
i_am_serious - 31
Profi (offline)

Dabei seit 06.2009
532 Beiträge
Geschrieben am: 05.11.2009 um 17:03 Uhr

hmm, sonst keine comments? ach kommt, da geht noch was, ich brauch kritik ^^
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