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(Our) Eternity

Rockschock - 35
Experte (offline)

Dabei seit 04.2005
1143 Beiträge

Geschrieben am: 01.08.2007 um 15:06 Uhr

Everything fades away
Let it go, I have to stay
There's no eternity
Not here, not now, not me


I come - I go
I was not really here...


Everything goes on
And it will be okay
but this time theres something wrong
Some feelings are too strong..


I want you to stay
Please don't fade away...


I follow you if you follow me
I live for you if you live for me
Cause you're the one I lived for
You're the one, I live for


I don't know why I need you
Somewhere in me sank the truth
But I pray, I pray to you please stay!
I pray to you..don't fade away..


You come - You go
You were not really here..


First time ever, heart and brain agree together..
First time ever, I can be as sure as never..
There's the eternity I seek for
There's the reason why I'm here


I started searching and went past..
I forgot the reason of this journey
I turned round, I closed my eyes..

And I found you
And I need you
Cause you're the one I live for
You're the one I lived for


This is our eternity
Here and now, but not for me
You round me out, you numb my pain
This eternity is made for two
And therefore I need you
I need you..
I need you...

We come - We go
And we were never here..




Bitte um ehrliche und konstruktive Kritik..

Wasting time like it was free..

xEmotionalx - 34
Halbprofi (offline)

Dabei seit 03.2007
198 Beiträge

Geschrieben am: 01.08.2007 um 15:09 Uhr

Ich finds echt geil geschrieben..
Ich meine, ein Gedicht auf englisch bekommt nicht jeder hin..
Ich finde, es kommt echt an, was du rüber bringen willst...

gut gemacht :daumenhoch:
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